Writing Handbook Exercises
 

Dangling Modifiers

Repair the dangling modifier error in each of the sample sentences (most often a dangling participle). A few sentences will require some rephrasing to make them grammatically sound. Write your finished sentences in the blanks provided.

Example: Promoted from the ranks, routine administration and enforcing discipline were the responsibilities of non-commissioned officers.

Promoted from the ranks, non-commissioned officers were responsible for routine administration and enforcing discipline.

(The dangling modifier in the example sentence is here underlined; its proper subject is in bold-faced type.)

8. Building on the old cliché that “things just aren’t the way the used to be,” since the fall of the Berlin Wall, the CF acknowledges that military operations have changed dramatically.