A Military Writer's Handbook
Punctuation

Special use of Ellipses

A special form of ellipses is used to indicate that a line or number of lines have been omitted within the body of a poem.

When quoting poetry, indicate a deleted line or lines by typing a row of spaced periods approximately the length of a complete line in the quoted poem:

  • ORIGINAL
  • If in some smothering dreams you too could pace
    Behind the wagon that we flung him in,
    And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,
    His hanging face, like a devil's sick of sin;
    If you could hear, at every jolt, the blood
    Come gargling from the froth corrupted lungs,
    Obscene as cancer, bitter as the cud
    Of vile, incurable sores on innocent tongues -
    My friend, you would not tell with such high zest
    The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est
    Pro patria mori.

    (Wilfred Owen, "Dulce et Decorum Est," lines 17-28)

  • QUOTATION OMITTING A LINE OR MORE IN THE BODY OF THE POEM
  • Wilfred Owen's "Dulce et Decorum Est" is uncompromising in its conclusion:

    If in some smothering dreams you too could pace
    Behind the wagon that we flung him in,
    And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,
    . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
    My friend, you would not tell with such high zest
    The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est
    Pro patria mori. (17-19, 26-28)

Help! A word about fairness when omitting words in a source quotation: mind that your omissions do not alter the sense of the original. The reason for using ellipsis marks is to reduce a quotation to the salient sentences or phrases that are of interest or relevance to your discussion, or to accommodate the quotation to the logic and grammar of your sentence. Use of ellipses should not result in a distortion of the original quotation.