A Military Writer's Handbook
Paragraphs

Compare/Contrast

The purpose of a compare/contrast paragraph is to show how two itemsideas, objects, characters, and so forthare alike or different from one another. The comparison or contrast should not simply discuss features that are self-evident, but should have some larger purpose of illustrating or illuminating an idea. The paragraph may solely discuss similarities (compare) or differences (contrast) or a combination of the two.

Typically, a compare/contrast paragraph is organized in one of two ways: part by part, in which the two subjects are discussed separately; or point by point, in which a common feature of both subjects is compared and/or contrasted.

Part by Part Paragraph:

        The function of control is to enable the creative expression of will and to manage the mission problem in order to minimize the risk of not achieving a satisfactory solution. Control is predicated on standard operating procedures (SOPs), rules of engagement (ROEs), regulations, military law, organizational structures, policies, equipment—in short, all those structures and processes put in place by the military to facilitate the accomplishment of its mission in a safe and efficient manner. The function of command is to invent novel solutions to mission problems, to provide conditions for starting, changing and terminating control, and to be the source of diligent purposefulness. If command is incapable of fulfilling these functions—if it cannot, for example, identify new patterns of behaviour in the adversary or take advantage of changes in the environment—then the mission may fail.

Point by Point Paragraph:

         Commanding is the act of creatively expressing will to accomplish the mission. Controlling is the act of enabling command and of managing risk using existing structures and processes. Essentially, controlling involves monitoring, carrying out, and adjusting processes that have already been developed. Commanding involves creating new structures and processes (i.e., plans, SOPs, etc.), establishing the conditions for initiating and terminating action, and making unanticipated changes to plans. Most acts, including decision making, involve a sophisticated amalgam of both commanding and controlling. For example, firing a rifle requires the initial command act of deciding when to pull the trigger (e.g., Are the conditions right? Is it safe? Am I ready to accept the responsibility of hitting (or missing) the target?). Continued firing at the same target then involves the controlling acts of monitoring hits and adjusting aim accordingly. However, if the person firing the weapon is told by another individual when to shoot and when to stop shooting, then the acts of commanding and controlling are divided between two people. The individual giving the instructions is commanding and the one firing is controlling.