A Military Writer's Handbook
Sentences
Coordination and Subordination
Combining Ideas
Technology changes the tools with which armies fight. It does not change the reality of the human role in conflict.

Technology changes the tools with which armies fight, but it does not change the reality of the human role in conflict.

A zero-casualties constraint directly influenced the commander's level of risk tolerance. This resulted in a limited strike strategy.

A zero-casualties constraint directly influenced the commander's level of risktolerance, and this resulted in a limited strike strategy.


Use sentence structure to show the relationship between the points you are discussing. This is often effectively done by combining short sentences that make related points of equal importance into what is called a compound sentence. The two sentences, or clauses, are joined by one of seven small words called coordinating conjunctions: (and, but, or, nor, for, yet, so).

Note that when you use a coordinating conjunction to join sentences, it must be preceded by a comma.

Practice Exercises (12) for Coordination


Subordinating One Idea to Another

The terrorist threat we face is transnational. The response must have dominant international dimensions.

Because the terrorist threat we face is transnational, the response must have
dominant international dimensions.

Chaos and complexity are different concepts. There is an important link between the two underlying theories.

While chaos and complexity are different concepts, there is an important link between the two underlying theories.

 

 

Joining short sentences with coordinating conjunctions is a way of creating sentence variety while emphasizing the equal importance of two ideas. When you want to present one idea as more important than another, construct a sentence that begins with a word that subordinates the first idea to the more important idea found in the main clause of the sentence. Words like Although, Because, If, Since, Unless, and While before a clause (sentence) indicate that it is of lesser importance than the main clause that follows. The particular words and phrases used to show subordination also indicate the kind of relationship between two ideas.

More than merely a sentence structure strategy, subordination is an effective way of indicating the logical relationship between the points you are discussing. Subordination is frequently used in argument when you want to stress the importance of one idea or point of view over another.

Practice Exercises (12) for Subordination