A Military Writer's Handbook
Words

Revising Sexist Language

In all sectors of the federal government, in business, and in educational institutions in particular, there is a growing sensitivity toward avoiding language that needlessly privileges one sex over the other. Such language indeed seems to disregard one half of the human race, or makes assumptions about the professional options for women and men that do not accord with the values of a society or organization that supports equal opportunity.

Sexist language, according to a Canadian government publication, "is language that excludes one sex or gives unequal treatment to women and men." Such language is affronting and even damaging to the extent that it diminishes an individual. Often sexist language is used unconsciously. But careful writers make an effort to avoid words and phrases that express a gender bias.

The list on the right offers non-sexist alternatives to familiar words and phrases that convey a gender bias.

Help! Do not use gender-specific terms in the greeting line of a formal letter when you do not know the sex of the person(s) who will read the letter:

Neither Dear Sir: nor Dear Madam: is advised.

Rather, if you do not know the sex of the addressee, write Dear Sir/Madam or use the individual's title or position:

Dear Personnel Officer:
Dear Members of the Academic Awards Committee:

Avoid perpetuating occupational stereotypes by drawing attention to exceptions to the norm:

male nurse
female tank commander
woman pilot

Unless matters of gender and appearance are relevant to your point, avoid drawing attention to sexual identity when discussing the career skills or intellectual abilities of an individual. You inform your reader that you are respecting of others and aware of human diversity by avoiding sexual stereotypes.

Avoid
Prefer
businessman businessperson
chairman chair / moderator
cleaning woman cleaner
craftsman artisan
fireman firefighter
layman layperson
man (as a verb) operate / staff
man-in-the-street average person / ordinary people
mankind humanity
man-made manufactured / synthetic
middleman go-between / contact
policeman / policewoman police officer
salesman sales representative
sportsmanship fair play
steward / stewardess flight attendant
workman worker